Editing the paragraph of Yaseen and explaining mistakes

Editing the paragraph of Yaseen and explaining mistakes

 

Being honesty means to be chosen not to lie, steal, deceive, or deceive. When we are honest, we build the capacity building and allow us to serve Allah and the faithful and believing Allah. We are happy with the peace of mind and mutual respect, and we will be confident that the Allah and the faithful believers Of Allah.

 

 

 

Explaining the mistakes now

  1. “Noun” will come after “being” . “HONEST”  is the noun
  2. “To be chosen” not required
  3. Why you wrote “Deceive” twice?
  4. “Which” refers to the “capacity building” and it will be used

 

 

This is how, the final paragraph, should be

Being  honest means not to lie, steal, or deceive. When we are honest, we build the capacity building which allow us to serve Allah and its faithful. We are happy with the peace of mind and mutual respect we get, and we will be confident that the Allah and the faithful believers Of Allah will be pleased with us.

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