Editing and explaining the mistakes of Yahaya Tijjani

Topic:-
Importance of true friends in today’s world of Yahaya Tijjani

 

As life in these days will not be completely individually, sepretly so we must comes togather in order to collaborate for our survival means integration, we must becareful in choices of friends worldwide for our success

 

Editing and explaining the mistakes now:-

Mistake – 1

Very poorly written

Don’t start the sentence with “As…….”

Say

“Life these days…….”

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Mistake – 2

Use “Present Tense” if possible, while forming sentences, as you are talking about things in general

 

Mistake -3

Check the spellings , you have made lots of mistakes.

 

 

 

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