Excellent Dilruba J No mistakes. But I have two suggestions
Friendship is one of the most beautiful relations of this world. Every person wants friendship because it gives pleasure, shelter and assistance. A true friend always helps his friend when he is in danger. Every person has a friend. It is not exceptional to me. I have a friend too. Her name is Arisha. She is a very good friend of mine. She is very talented and her parents are very good. They treat me as their own daughter. Arisha stands by me when I fall in danger. I can share my weal and woe with Arisha. So I can say that the importance of friendship is essential for all people.
Every person has a friend
Instead of “Every Person”, say
You said (In the last sentence)
Friendship is essential for “all people”
Friendship is essential for all (people not required)
My query to you:-
“Friendship gives pleasure, shelter and assistance
Can you explain the need of using “shelter”?