Excellent Dilruba J No mistakes. But I have two suggestions

Excellent Dilruba J No mistakes. But I have two suggestions

 

Friendship is one of the most beautiful relations of this world. Every person wants friendship because it gives pleasure, shelter and assistance. A true friend always helps his friend when he is in danger. Every person has a friend. It is not exceptional to me. I have a friend too. Her name is Arisha. She is a very good friend of mine. She is very talented and her parents are very good. They treat me as their own daughter. Arisha stands by me when I fall in danger. I can share my weal and woe with Arisha. So I can say that the importance of friendship is essential for all people.

 

First suggestion

You said

Every person has a friend

Instead of “Every Person”, say

“Everyone”

 

Second suggestion

You said (In the last sentence)

Friendship is essential for “all people”

Instead say

Friendship is essential for all (people not required)

 

 

My query to you:-

You said

“Friendship gives pleasure, shelter and assistance

Can you explain the need of using “shelter”?

 

 

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