Well tried Monica Thakuri !!!!!! but there are following mistakes:-

 

Well tried Monica Thakuri !!!!!! but there are following mistakes:-

Hello . I am monika . I recently passed my master degree from sk university. I teached home tutions from 8 years and i love to teached childrens.I am a enocent girl and like people mostly honest, shareing, careing, loyal and who have a goal. I hate flot people, never wann to change , wann sucess without goal , never think his/ her mistake ,they are every time made mistake but they blame other .

 

Mistakes:-

Mistake – 1

“Teached” – No word

“Taught” is the past tense (Use it)


Mistake -2

enocent – No word

“Innocent” (Correct word)

Use appropriate article before “Innocent”

“AN” innocent girl


Mistake – 3

Shareing & Careing :- No words

“Sharing” and “Caring” CORRECT WORDS


Mistake – 4

Never use “And” & “Who” together

Say

“I am an innocent girl and like people mostly honest, sharing, caring and loyal who have a goal”


Mistake – 5

Never use “SLANG” words like “WANNA”

Flot people?

Do you mean “FRAUD ” ?

(Reply in the comment section)


Mistake – 6

sucess :- No word

success :- Correct word


Mistake – 7

They blame other (Wrong)

Use “s” with “others”

They blame others (Correct)

 


Mistake :- 8

They are every time made mistake (wrong)

You can say in the following ways:-

They everytime make mistakes (correct)

or

They are everytime making mistakes (Correct)


 

Mistake – 9

I hate flot people, never wann to change , wann sucess without goal , never think his/ her mistake ,they are every time made mistake but they blame other  (Wrong)

Kindly say in the below manner :-

 

I hate fraud people AS THEY never want to change.

THEY want success but have no goal , never think ABOUT THEIR mistake. They are every time MAKING mistake but they blame otherS .

 

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