Nicely written by Anushiya, but check the website to know your mistakes

Hi,

At first I wanna say thank you for giving this topic to write.

College life vs professional life… in these I suppose college life. College life is like an imaginary wonderland because we enjoyed our life in this stage only. After we finished our school life, we entered into our college where we learned many things and met different people.In this stage we knew ourselves like our strategy. First we changour dressing sense, behaviour when we watch others. At this period our skills developed well. We get many friends and throw  out our fears and also participate in many competitions. Actually we mature ourselves. So according to me “college life” is better.

 

Mistake -1

Although, the below sentence is correct, but (wanna say) is not required”

At first I wanna say thank you for giving this topic to write You can say

You can simply say:-

At first, I thank you for giving this topic to write

 

Mistake – 2

Write in present tense, as this is an event which goes on and on.

Don’t say:-“We enjoyed our life in this stage only” (wrong, in this context”
Say, “We enjoy our life “

 

Mistake 3

Put comma, when required (Check the image, I have mentioned the places)

 

Mistake 4

In this stage (wrong)

At this stage (correct)

 

Mistake 5

Fears (wrong)

Fear (correct)

 

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Hi,

At first I wanna say thank you for giving this topic to write.

College life vs professional life… in these I suppose college life. College life is like an imaginary wonderland because we enjoyed our life in this stage only. After we finished our school life, we entered into our college where we learned many things and met different people.In this stage we knew ourselves like our strategy. First we changour dressing sense, behaviour when we watch others. At this period our skills developed well. We get many friends and throw  out our fears and also participate in many competitions. Actually we mature ourselves. So according to me “college life” is better.

 

Mistake -1

Although, the below sentence is correct, but ( “wanna say” is not required”

At first I wanna say thank you for giving this topic to write You can say

You can simply say:-

At first, I thank you for giving this topic to write

 

Mistake – 2

Write in present tense, all the sentences as you are talking about the events which are happening till date.

Don’t say:-“We enjoyed our life in this stage only” (wrong, in this context”
Say, “We enjoy our life “

 

Mistake 3

Put comma, when required (Check the image, I have mentioned the places)

 

Mistake 4

In this stage (wrong)

At this stage (correct)

 

Mistake 5

Fears (wrong)

Fear (correct)

 

You will know mistakes clearly, if you read the below post:-

125+ Shocking English Grammar Mistakes in 2019, that makes you look dumb

 

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