Very well written by Mitheille Vanona, only 3 mistakes. Find them here

Very well written by Mitheille Vanona, only 3 mistakes. Find them here

Yes, everything has its reverse. As we have seen earlier, social media can help us find /meet new people. But it is dangerous as well since there are lots of people who are not honnest. It becomes often the field where scams widly exist. As a matter of love, many falls in love with “fake account” (Catfish) and get disappointed; some try to play with your life by manipulating weak persons and many others. I want to say though, that the social media is helpful for some activities but we should be careful at the same time when using it , Peace,

 

Correction

Mistakes

Mistake – 1

 

Honnest (wrong)

Honest (correct)

 


 

Mistake – 2

Widly  (wrong)

Widely (correct)

 


Mistake – 3

Many falls (wrong)

Many fall (correct)

 


 

 

 

 

Very well explained by Mahmud!!!!Click to know your mistakes

Its cause effect to the young students due to wasting time on checking latest news sometime discourage people by release some fake news and also cause war among societies
Nicely explained but following mistakes are there:-
Never create more than 1+1/2 half sentence
(As it discourage the reader)
 
You should write like below
It adversely effects the students, as they waste time while referring different sites or news. There is also fake news circulated in social media and can cause war among societies.
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Very well written by Mithielle Vanona : Congrats !!!!! Only TWO mistakeS: Click below

Following is the beautiful article which Mithielle Vanona has written on the
“Importance of social media”

Yes, that’s true. In fact, people can
communicate easier as they just have to “click” on something and can talk to the whole world. The distance is not anymore a limit; various languages as well can’t stop people from talking to one another, because learning a language has become easier thanks to the different applications internet offers. Easier too to find new people since we don’t have to go out nor travel to meet them. Just to stay where we are, connecting with our phones and in one click , new people start to be part of our life.. So, i agree with this statement.

 

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Let’s find two mistakes:-

 

 

You said

Easier too to find new people since we don’t have to go out nor travel to meet them.  (wrong)

We will use “Neither” and “Nor” in the above sentence.

For ex.

Easier too to find new people since we NEITHER have to go out nor travel to meet them. 

 

Mistake – 2

Always use “I” in Capital Letter

 

My suggestion:-
Kindly write short sentences max 1+1/2 half long. (Not more than that) and start a new sentence after that .

It will continue to bind the interest of readers


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