Following is the beautiful article which Mithielle Vanona has written on the
“Importance of social media”
Yes, that’s true. In fact, people can
communicate easier as they just have to “click” on something and can talk to the whole world. The distance is not anymore a limit; various languages as well can’t stop people from talking to one another, because learning a language has become easier thanks to the different applications internet offers. Easier too to find new people since we don’t have to go out nor travel to meet them. Just to stay where we are, connecting with our phones and in one click , new people start to be part of our life.. So, i agree with this statement.
Let’s find two mistakes:-
Easier too to find new people since we don’t have to go out nor travel to meet them. (wrong)
We will use “Neither” and “Nor” in the above sentence.
Easier too to find new people since we NEITHER have to go out nor travel to meet them.
Mistake – 2
Always use “I” in Capital Letter
Kindly write short sentences max 1+1/2 half long. (Not more than that) and start a new sentence after that .
It will continue to bind the interest of readers
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