Well tried Monica Thakuri !!!!!! but there are following mistakes:-
Hello . I am monika . I recently passed my master degree from sk university. I teached home tutions from 8 years and i love to teached childrens.I am a enocent girl and like people mostly honest, shareing, careing, loyal and who have a goal. I hate flot people, never wann to change , wann sucess without goal , never think his/ her mistake ,they are every time made mistake but they blame other .
Mistake – 1
“Teached” – No word
“Taught” is the past tense (Use it)
enocent – No word
“Innocent” (Correct word)
Use appropriate article before “Innocent”
“AN” innocent girl
Mistake – 3
Shareing & Careing :- No words
“Sharing” and “Caring” CORRECT WORDS
Mistake – 4
Never use “And” & “Who” together
“I am an innocent girl and like people mostly honest, sharing, caring and loyal who have a goal”
Mistake – 5
Never use “SLANG” words like “WANNA”
Do you mean “FRAUD ” ?
(Reply in the comment section)
Mistake – 6
sucess :- No word
success :- Correct word
Mistake – 7
They blame other (Wrong)
Use “s” with “others”
They blame others (Correct)
Mistake :- 8
They are every time made mistake (wrong)
You can say in the following ways:-
They everytime make mistakes (correct)
They are everytime making mistakes (Correct)
Mistake – 9
I hate flot people, never wann to change , wann sucess without goal , never think his/ her mistake ,they are every time made mistake but they blame other (Wrong)
Kindly say in the below manner :-
I hate fraud people AS THEY never want to change.
THEY want success but have no goal , never think ABOUT THEIR mistake. They are every time MAKING mistake but they blame otherS .
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