Explaining mistakes of Monica on the topic “Nepal”

Mistake – 1

Nepal is one of the oldest country in the world (wrong)

Nepal is one of the oldest countries in the world  (correct)

Mistake – 2

Nepal is surrounding my two countries (wrong)
Nepal is surrounded by two countries (correct)

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Mistake – 3

Nepal is the rich country in natural prosperity (wrong)

Nepal  is rich in natural resources (correct)

Mistake – 4

Most peoples are farmers (wrong)

Most people are farmers (correct)
(Never say peoples)


Mistake 5

Nepal is developing country (wrong)
Nepal is a developing country (correct)


Mistake 6

Many tourist visit (wrong)

Many tourists visit (correct)


Mistake 7

Nepal is able to earn foreign currency which can be for development (wrong)’

Nepal is able to earn foreign currency which can be for development (correct)


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Well tried Monica Thakuri !!!!!! but there are following mistakes:-

 

Well tried Monica Thakuri !!!!!! but there are following mistakes:-

Hello . I am monika . I recently passed my master degree from sk university. I teached home tutions from 8 years and i love to teached childrens.I am a enocent girl and like people mostly honest, shareing, careing, loyal and who have a goal. I hate flot people, never wann to change , wann sucess without goal , never think his/ her mistake ,they are every time made mistake but they blame other .

 

Mistakes:-

Mistake – 1

“Teached” – No word

“Taught” is the past tense (Use it)


Mistake -2

enocent – No word

“Innocent” (Correct word)

Use appropriate article before “Innocent”

“AN” innocent girl


Mistake – 3

Shareing & Careing :- No words

“Sharing” and “Caring” CORRECT WORDS


Mistake – 4

Never use “And” & “Who” together

Say

“I am an innocent girl and like people mostly honest, sharing, caring and loyal who have a goal”


Mistake – 5

Never use “SLANG” words like “WANNA”

Flot people?

Do you mean “FRAUD ” ?

(Reply in the comment section)


Mistake – 6

sucess :- No word

success :- Correct word


Mistake – 7

They blame other (Wrong)

Use “s” with “others”

They blame others (Correct)

 


Mistake :- 8

They are every time made mistake (wrong)

You can say in the following ways:-

They everytime make mistakes (correct)

or

They are everytime making mistakes (Correct)


 

Mistake – 9

I hate flot people, never wann to change , wann sucess without goal , never think his/ her mistake ,they are every time made mistake but they blame other  (Wrong)

Kindly say in the below manner :-

 

I hate fraud people AS THEY never want to change.

THEY want success but have no goal , never think ABOUT THEIR mistake. They are every time MAKING mistake but they blame otherS .

 

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Awesome job Dilruba :- Let’s now explain your mistakes (Check website)

There is no doubt that English is an international language.It is essential language for people to know this language.A good and experienced teacher is important.A good and experienced teacher can teach students properly.Before doing this work,a teacher has to do some things.A teacher has to know the English language properly.He has to know all grammatical rules.He has to speak English fluently.He has to read many English books a lot.He has to have patience so that he can teach students with care.If these things are done,a good and experienced teacher can be got.

 

Mistakes:-

Never repeat the same word in a single sentence.
You used “language” again in the same sentence

You said:-

It is essential language for people to know this language  (Not proper)

Better say

It is an essential language for people to know (Correct)

YOU WILL ADD “AN” before “ESSENTIAL”

  • An essential language

 


Mistake – 2

You said

If these things are done,a good and experienced teacher can be got (Wrong)

Use proper adjective than “GOOD”

Simply say

If these things are done, it results in creating an experienced teacher

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Syeda Saher – A sister from Pakistan is an inspiration. Here’s How!!!

A sister from Pakistan is an inspiration for people ?

How?

Here’s the reason.

She learns things very fast and has confidence

Yes, if you want to see that, then Syeda Saher is one such awesome example who is indeed quite an  inspiration for women folks

Yes, she is breaking the stereotype that ladies can even chose their profession and stand on their legs, ofcourse keeping in mind Shariat.

Every sister from across the world, should take inspiration from Syeda Saher who is ambitious, hardwork, dedicated and serious towards her goals.

She knows her role and at the same time, she also wants to stand on her own legs.

She is going to enlighten the students by essaying the role of an English Teacher.

It  is this reason, she deserves praise and appreciation.

I wish Almighty, that you get all the success you deserve.

Let’s all pray for this sister

Keep on working hard

Keep on praying

Success will come to you Insha Allah

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Nicely written by Ahmed Elmi – But there are following mistakes:-

My friend Ahmed Elmi has written the following paragraph :-

 

Hi Teacher, My name is Ahmed Elmi, i am somalilander and my mother tongue is Somali. I am highly appreciated to join to your this teaching page of learning English. Becuase, the learning English is my most favorite dream. So, l would like to thank you for your retire less taught lessons you gave us daily.
Teacher, I would like to ask you a question and my question is, what is the simplest method that i become a person who speak English as a natively for a short time?

Let’s know the mistakes:-

Mistake – 1

Write short sentences.

 

Mistake – 2

“I” should always be in CAPITAL LETTER

 

 

For rest of the mistakes,  please refer the image below :-

 


 

 

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My answer lies in th below link.

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Kaltouma Ait Oussalah thanks her mother 

 

Kaltouma Ait Oussalah thanks her mother.

She says
“It is true that mother’s love is the purest of all. No one can have any doubt about the extent of sacrifices mothers give for their children. Yes, be it waking up all night to change the diapers or feeding their children.

Yes, still inspite of losing all the strength, she is fresh to again sacrifice another day for her children.

Her love in unconditional, so her pain of carrying for Nine months. She happily does all of that, because her love for children surpasses all.

Likewise
I, Kaltouma Ait Oussalah   thank you “MOM” for all the sacrifices and pain, you have taken for me.

As mother, I am sure you should be proud of me , as your daughter.

I apologize to you for the naughtiness, I have done done in the past 🙁

I again thank you, for your love and care

Your daughter has MASHA ALLAH grown up under your special care and supervision.

“You Rock Mom:- 🙂

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Nicely written by Fikresellassie Kahssay, but there are following mistakes:-

 

 

For me, college life is better than professional life b/college life has  sweet & unforgetablememories. Example you freely discuss with your classmet classmateswith no frustration,fear etc… But not in professional life, where you feel more  responsiblethan when you were incampus.

 

 

 

 

First Mistake

Nicely written, but there are few mistakes :-

As me (wrong)

For me (correct)

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Second Mistake

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Don’t write short form “B” (Wrong)

Say “Because” (correct)

 

Third Mistake

Sweat memories (wrong)

Sweet memories (correct)

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Forth mistake

Classmet (wrong)

Classmates (correct)

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Fifth mistake

You feel more responsibility (wrong)

You feel more responsible (correct)

Sixth Mistake

On campus (wrong)

In Campus (correct)

 

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Dina Khaled – A sister from Egypt is an inspiration for working mothers. Here’s Why!!!

How beautifully a sister from Egypt who is also a proud mother is managing the art of house and her profession

Yes, if you want to see that, then Dina Khaled is one such awesome example who is indeed quite an  inspiration for women folks, especially mothers.

Yes, she is breaking the stereotype that mothers can even chose their profession and stand on their legs, ofcourse keeping in mind Shariat.

Every sister from across the world, should take inspiration from Dina Khaled who is ambitious, hardwork, dedicated and serious towards her goals.

She knows her role as a  mother, and at the same time, she also wants to stand on her own legs.

She is going to enlighten the students by essaying the role of an English Teacher.

It  is this reason, she deserves praise and appreciation.

I wish Almighty, that you get all the success you deserve.

Let’s all pray for this sister

Keep on working hard

Keep on praying

Success will come to you Insha Allah

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Excellent Dilruba J No mistakes. But I have two suggestions

Excellent Dilruba J No mistakes. But I have two suggestions

 

Friendship is one of the most beautiful relations of this world. Every person wants friendship because it gives pleasure, shelter and assistance. A true friend always helps his friend when he is in danger. Every person has a friend. It is not exceptional to me. I have a friend too. Her name is Arisha. She is a very good friend of mine. She is very talented and her parents are very good. They treat me as their own daughter. Arisha stands by me when I fall in danger. I can share my weal and woe with Arisha. So I can say that the importance of friendship is essential for all people.

 

First suggestion

You said

Every person has a friend

Instead of “Every Person”, say

“Everyone”

 

Second suggestion

You said (In the last sentence)

Friendship is essential for “all people”

Instead say

Friendship is essential for all (people not required)

 

 

My query to you:-

You said

“Friendship gives pleasure, shelter and assistance

Can you explain the need of using “shelter”?

 

 

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Very well written Preet Kaur – Explaining the mistakes with proper guidance

Very well written Preet Kaur – Explaining the mistakes with proper guidance

True friends can be define as the wonderful segment of our life.they always be with us in our hard times.they are like as a family for us because they differentiate us from bad evils.without friends life is like a tissue paper.

 

Mistake – 1

After “Can be” any verb will be in the past tense

Can be+ past tense of verb

So,  CAN BE “DEFINED”

 

Mistake – 2

They always be with us (wrong)

Use “Are” and interchange the position with “always”

They are always with us  (correct)

Mistake – 3

They are like as a family (wrong)

“Like” & “As” will not come together

Two ways to write

  1. Remove “As”

They are like a family(correct)

  1. They are as a family (correct)

 

 

Mistake – 4

Begin sentence with first letter as capital letter

 

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