Editing and explaining the mistakes of Yahaya Tijjani

Topic:-
Importance of true friends in today’s world of Yahaya Tijjani

 

As life in these days will not be completely individually, sepretly so we must comes togather in order to collaborate for our survival means integration, we must becareful in choices of friends worldwide for our success

 

Editing and explaining the mistakes now:-

Mistake – 1

Very poorly written

Don’t start the sentence with “As…….”

Say

“Life these days…….”

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Mistake – 2

Use “Present Tense” if possible, while forming sentences, as you are talking about things in general

 

Mistake -3

Check the spellings , you have made lots of mistakes.

 

 

 

Ravi Krishna has won various prizes as a chess player in school / college

Ravi Krishna   has won various prizes as a chess player in school / college

 

Ravi Krishna – An Indian student and a chess player invites everyone to visit his beautiful country

He says

India is a very traditional country which is world famous of Taj Mahal. People from different religions live together in harmony.

 

 

Note of Thanks

I am Arpit Sharma, a 11 years experienced teacher in India and I thank my friend Ravi Krishna .

May you continue to get success

 

 

Also Read :- Salman from Afghanistan shares about interesting facts

Editing and explaining mistakes to Sahar Z Abd Elghany

Bringing up a child Written by Sahar Z Abd Elghany

It’s not that easy to raise a child. Before you take the decision of having a child you should think dozens of time.When you have a child all your life changes forever. Not only about the expenses, but also about your interests in life,your priorities and so on.It is like as if your heart is walking in front of your eyes,when your child is a baby. Day after day you watch them growing up ,taking more responsibilities in life, beginning to depend on themselves ,but you feel that they are still babies.
In order to raise a good member in community, you should read and learn a lot about how to do that mission successfully, and the most important advice ,in my point of view, is don’t spoil your child a lot ,but give them the chance to be independent.

 

Check the image:-Sahar Z Abd Elghany

I have edited and explained your mistakes.

Also, I want you know the following things:-

  • Don’t write long sentences. (One and half lines are enough)
  • Don’t write more than that.
  • Use comma when desired

 

Also, Read the below post

175+ secrets to improve English Grammar in 2018 – English Ma’am

 

Editing and explaining the mistakes to Ibni Ibrahim Hassan

My friend Ibni Ibrahim Hassan  has written the following paragraph:-

Nowadays it is not easy to find true friend. Friend to have mutual respect and honesty from each other, as for me true friend is the most essential thing to have in this world best can advice you to solve your problems and even helps to correct your mistake
However other believe true friend not exist most friendly relationship is for benefits
What is the some friend they relationship is not good for something not like consuming drugs and so on
In my opinion it’s very important to have a true friend you can share everything with in difficult situation and other the true they like gift for me from God more you care of them the most they care of you

 

I have edited and explained the mistakes.

Check the below image

 

You need to improve your Tenses, so I have created a post for you.

Check below

Know Present Indefinite Tense 

 

Explaining mistakes to Imran Khan Baloch

Street power emerges when people are deprived of their civil rights. This leads to aggression against the ruling government, which results in dismantling democracy. However, street power takes its roots from the eras of martial law administration, since the first National Student Federation (NSF) launched in the late 1960s. Since then, it was prevailed in Pakistan by the subsequent political parties. Some take advantage of it to gain their vested interests while others due to their dissatisfaction from their elected civilian ruling. However, this results into nothing except mass injuries, arsons, barricades and vandalism. Hence, political parties use street power to deter democratic institutions as their partisans not only impede economic development but also jeopardize justice and democracy. Moreover, individuals due to the lack of egalitarianism and foreign factors to undergo their hidden agendas are equally responsible for dismantling democracy in Pakistan.

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Well done, only two small mistakes, which I have already explained.

Editing and explaining mistakes for Anasuya Ma’am

Education is necessary to every man. Education brings
all necessary changes in man. Educated people can contribute their services to their county in their limits
Giving education is a solution to so many problems of
our nation Education is our fundamental right

 

Mistake – 1

Education is necessary to everyman (wrong)

Education is necessary for everyone (correct)

We use “TO” for directions

Read : Where to use “TO” and “FOR” – Detailed explanation 

I am going to school, to office, to college

We use FOR below

  • Studies are important for everyone
  • Clothes are necessary for everyone
  • Food is important for everyone

 

Mistake – 2

Always denote FULL STOP (.) in between the sentences

 

Mistake – 3

Giving education (Wrong)

Providing education (correct)

Also Read: Where to use “Neither” and “Nor”

Editing and explaining the mistakes :- Jameel

Education is one of life necessities which must every one fight for it , due to its importance. For example, Education is the best way to build a wonderful society .

Mistake – 1

Education is one of life necessities (wrong)

One of the life’s necessities  (correct)

Similarly, we say

  • One of the table’s cover is dirty
  • One of the sofa’s cover
  • One of the flag’s cloth
  • One of the bathroom’s tiles

 

Also, If there is an adjective after “One of “then that will be in superlative degree.

and there will be accompanying noun which will always be plural.

For ex.

One of + THE+ superlative degree adjective+ plural noun

  • One of the best students
  • One of the best moments
  • One of the cutest smiles
  • One of the sour lemons
  • One of the worst movies

 

 

175+ secrets to improve English Grammar in 2018 – English Ma’am

 

Editing and explaining the paragraph :- SHAHDADKOT

When you have everything that you need to make a new invention, it is a tiny achievement in the eyes of justice. When you have nothing that you need to make a new thing,it is great achievement in the eyes of justice. “SHAHDADKOT the darkest in education and the brightest in illiteracy and unemployment.A man with books is considered an alien, because men are often found working for leading a simple life that includes meal to eat and water to drink. However, it is not that the city of SHAHDADKOT is known as the city of ignorant people,there are great professors of English(Faizullah Magsi, Nazeer Bhatti,Saleem Raza Mirani, Naseer Soomro, Saeed Wadho and whatnot.),Mathematics(Salah din Soomro,Abdullah Wadho,Iltaf Hussain Chandio and Etc),Physics(Mian Gul Mekan, Fazul Muhammad Umrani and Etcetera),Chemistry (Noor Nabi Bhatti and Etc),Biology(Shazad Soomro, Arshad Soomro Amjad Brohi and Etc). I am sorry to the teachers whom I couldn’t mention because I couldn’t recall their names at the moment. At the same time I am sorry to say that I cannot mention even a single name of a professor or a lecturer in computer science here in our city,looking at the prospective on cannot imagine anyone progressed in computer science. But it is well said,”God helps those who help themselves. ” I worked day in and day out to prove my zeal towards computer science, I took the help of many websites and books to make a new application, Alhamdulillah my work is half done and I believe that within the passage of time I will encounter my project and will introduce it here is in my city and then world wide…..

 

 

Here is the edited para:-

Nicely written

When you have everything that you need to make a new invention, it is a tiny achievement in the eyes of Jury. SHAHDADKOT:- the city which is considered as the darkest in education and the brightest in illiteracy and unemployment.A man with books is considered an alien, because men are often found working for leading a simple life that includes meal to eat and water to drink. However, it is not that SHAHDADKOT is known as the city of ignorant people,there are great professors of English(Faizullah Magsi, Nazeer Bhatti,Saleem Raza Mirani, Naseer Soomro, Saeed Wadho and whatnot.),Mathematics(Salah din Soomro,Abdullah Wadho,Iltaf Hussain Chandio and Etc),Physics(Mian Gul Mekan, Fazul Muhammad Umrani and Etcetera),Chemistry (Noor Nabi Bhatti and Etc),Biology(Shazad Soomro, Arshad Soomro Amjad Brohi and Etc)

I am sorry to the teachers whom I couldn’t mention because I couldn’t recall their names at the moment. At the same time I am sorry to say that I cannot mention even a single name of a professor or a lecturer in computer science here in our city,looking at the prospective on cannot imagine anyone progressed in computer science. But it is well said,”God helps those who help themselves. ” I worked day in and day out to prove my zeal towards computer science, I took the help of many websites and books to make a new application, Alhamdulillah my work is half done and I believe that within the passage of time I will encounter my project and will introduce it here is in my city and then world wide…..

 

Mistake – 1

Always write noun:- In the eyes of “Doctor”

Another ex.

I am innocent in the eyes of my father

We don’t say :- In the eyes of “Fatherhood”

 

Mistake – 2

Shahdadkot is the city/village/hamlet (You didn’t mention, when you wrote the name of Shahdadkot)

Rest is excellent.

Your writing skills are awesome.

Keep on improving.

 

Also read the below post:-

175+ secrets to improve English Grammar in 2018 – English Ma’am

 

 

 

Steven Chin – A maths wizard, weaves magic with his calculations

Steven Chin – A maths wizard, weaves magic with his calculations

How many of you can calculate three digits numbers right in your head within split second?

It will surely be hard for most of you, but not for an energetic, ambitious, positive and highly devoted young man Steven Chin.

Yes, he has shared his magical power of calculating multiple numbers orally and that too within few seconds.

Something, which will indeed make you awestruck. Isn’t it?

Do you want to know the real trick behind his power?

Read the post to find out more:-

Well, he says and I quote ”

“I can multiply numbers mentally in my head or with a pencil and paper within few seconds. For examples, 42 x 48= 2016; 54 x54= 2916; 99 x 99= 9801; 101 x 103= 10403; 50 ÷ 7= 7.1428571. 3 seconds for each of the aforesaid answers”.

Well, this is something, which not many can count, but for him it is so easy. It is indeed a matter of few seconds.

I am so sure, that after reading the post, many students who are about to take their maths exams, will be so eager to know the trick behind it.

Also, so many of you

Well, if you are one of them, then comment. I will request him to share the secret right here in the post itself

 

Here is the trick

Squaring any two digit number in their fifties:
Example 1: 54 x 54
S1: Multiply 5 by 5 = 25
S2: 25 + 4 = 29_ _
S3: 4 x 4 = 1 6
S4: Fill up the two
blank spaces
after the 29 with
16. The answer is 2916.

Example 2: 58 x 58
S1: 5 x 5 = 25
S2: 25 + 8 = 33 _ _
S3 : 8 x 8 = 64
Answer = 3364.

R u able to follow. Easy, I am sure you can follow. Learning
is fun if you know how. Any comments, please let me know

 

Let’s know more about Steven Chin:-

This is what my brother has to say

As requested by our group leader, brother Arpit Sharma, I humbly introduce myself. 

I am a Malaysian citizen, born in Kuala Lumpur, and residing in Kuala Lumpur since. 

I went to the Cochrane Road School near my house then in Kuala Lumpur. I further my education from the Australian And New Zealand Insurance Institute in Melbourne, Australia.
Through examination, I have a Diploma specializing in General 
Insurance. Subsequently through examination I have become a Graduate Member of the Institute with a Professional identification ANZIIF (Senior Associate).

I worked in a few Insurance Companies. I had held various positions then, Branch Manager; 
Underwriting Manager; Claims Manager; and also Marketing Manager. All these are past memories and we men would call this history.

I have come to know Speed Mathd about 20 or more years
ago. I like learning and practising Speed Maths for purposes of exercising my brain muscles and cells so to continuing to maintaining a good and brilliant memory.

Imran Khan Baloch – Nicely written – Let’s check mistakes

It is said that honesty is the best policy.However, it is on of the actions which lead man to danger, poverty and destruction. An honest person is always found penniless, for that he always finds clear and crystal ways of living his life.An honest people is also punished for such honesty that brings trouble for a dishonest person.The honest person never develops because he believes in hard working and tries only to meet his basic needs.Hence,honesty is not the best policy in today’s world.

Two mistakes are there (check the image)

The color part is not clear