Nicely written by Ahmed Elmi – But there are following mistakes:-

My friend Ahmed Elmi has written the following paragraph :-

 

Hi Teacher, My name is Ahmed Elmi, i am somalilander and my mother tongue is Somali. I am highly appreciated to join to your this teaching page of learning English. Becuase, the learning English is my most favorite dream. So, l would like to thank you for your retire less taught lessons you gave us daily.
Teacher, I would like to ask you a question and my question is, what is the simplest method that i become a person who speak English as a natively for a short time?

Let’s know the mistakes:-

Mistake – 1

Write short sentences.

 

Mistake – 2

“I” should always be in CAPITAL LETTER

 

 

For rest of the mistakes,  please refer the image below :-

 


 

 

You also asked about the ways to improve English, at par with native. 
My answer lies in th below link.

Read and get back to me 🙂

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Kaltouma Ait Oussalah thanks her mother 

 

Kaltouma Ait Oussalah thanks her mother.

She says
“It is true that mother’s love is the purest of all. No one can have any doubt about the extent of sacrifices mothers give for their children. Yes, be it waking up all night to change the diapers or feeding their children.

Yes, still inspite of losing all the strength, she is fresh to again sacrifice another day for her children.

Her love in unconditional, so her pain of carrying for Nine months. She happily does all of that, because her love for children surpasses all.

Likewise
I, Kaltouma Ait Oussalah   thank you “MOM” for all the sacrifices and pain, you have taken for me.

As mother, I am sure you should be proud of me , as your daughter.

I apologize to you for the naughtiness, I have done done in the past 🙁

I again thank you, for your love and care

Your daughter has MASHA ALLAH grown up under your special care and supervision.

“You Rock Mom:- 🙂

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Nicely written by Fikresellassie Kahssay, but there are following mistakes:-

 

 

For me, college life is better than professional life b/college life has  sweet & unforgetablememories. Example you freely discuss with your classmet classmateswith no frustration,fear etc… But not in professional life, where you feel more  responsiblethan when you were incampus.

 

 

 

 

First Mistake

Nicely written, but there are few mistakes :-

As me (wrong)

For me (correct)

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Second Mistake

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Don’t write short form “B” (Wrong)

Say “Because” (correct)

 

Third Mistake

Sweat memories (wrong)

Sweet memories (correct)

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Forth mistake

Classmet (wrong)

Classmates (correct)

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Fifth mistake

You feel more responsibility (wrong)

You feel more responsible (correct)

Sixth Mistake

On campus (wrong)

In Campus (correct)

 

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Dina Khaled – A sister from Egypt is an inspiration for working mothers. Here’s Why!!!

How beautifully a sister from Egypt who is also a proud mother is managing the art of house and her profession

Yes, if you want to see that, then Dina Khaled is one such awesome example who is indeed quite an  inspiration for women folks, especially mothers.

Yes, she is breaking the stereotype that mothers can even chose their profession and stand on their legs, ofcourse keeping in mind Shariat.

Every sister from across the world, should take inspiration from Dina Khaled who is ambitious, hardwork, dedicated and serious towards her goals.

She knows her role as a  mother, and at the same time, she also wants to stand on her own legs.

She is going to enlighten the students by essaying the role of an English Teacher.

It  is this reason, she deserves praise and appreciation.

I wish Almighty, that you get all the success you deserve.

Let’s all pray for this sister

Keep on working hard

Keep on praying

Success will come to you Insha Allah

Don’t forget to read, if you want to become a teacher

175+ secrets to improve English Grammar in 2018 – English Ma’am

Excellent Dilruba J No mistakes. But I have two suggestions

Excellent Dilruba J No mistakes. But I have two suggestions

 

Friendship is one of the most beautiful relations of this world. Every person wants friendship because it gives pleasure, shelter and assistance. A true friend always helps his friend when he is in danger. Every person has a friend. It is not exceptional to me. I have a friend too. Her name is Arisha. She is a very good friend of mine. She is very talented and her parents are very good. They treat me as their own daughter. Arisha stands by me when I fall in danger. I can share my weal and woe with Arisha. So I can say that the importance of friendship is essential for all people.

 

First suggestion

You said

Every person has a friend

Instead of “Every Person”, say

“Everyone”

 

Second suggestion

You said (In the last sentence)

Friendship is essential for “all people”

Instead say

Friendship is essential for all (people not required)

 

 

My query to you:-

You said

“Friendship gives pleasure, shelter and assistance

Can you explain the need of using “shelter”?

 

 

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Very well written Preet Kaur – Explaining the mistakes with proper guidance

Very well written Preet Kaur – Explaining the mistakes with proper guidance

True friends can be define as the wonderful segment of our life.they always be with us in our hard times.they are like as a family for us because they differentiate us from bad evils.without friends life is like a tissue paper.

 

Mistake – 1

After “Can be” any verb will be in the past tense

Can be+ past tense of verb

So,  CAN BE “DEFINED”

 

Mistake – 2

They always be with us (wrong)

Use “Are” and interchange the position with “always”

They are always with us  (correct)

Mistake – 3

They are like as a family (wrong)

“Like” & “As” will not come together

Two ways to write

  1. Remove “As”

They are like a family(correct)

  1. They are as a family (correct)

 

 

Mistake – 4

Begin sentence with first letter as capital letter

 

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Explaining the mistakes to Solo (25th Dec, 18)

Explaining the mistakes to Solo

I began to learn english for 2 years ago. During these moments, I have seen that I have improved but a little bit because I didn’t have anyone to make a practice with me like spoken and written everyday. So if there is someone here who has the same matter, so don’t hesitate to inbox me

Five  mistakes:-

 

Mistake -1

“E” of “English” should be bold

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Mistake – 2

“For” is not required

We say

I began to learn English two years ago

Mistake – 3

During these moments (wrong)

Say

During such a time / During such a phase / During this time

Mistake – 4

“But a” is not required

I have improved little bit

 

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Happy Birthday : Shivshankar Baburao Rokade Palamkar

Many Happy Returns Of The Day 🙂

Shivshankar Baburao Rokade Palamkar

 

May God give you all the happiness of the world.

May you continue to prosper and reach the highest ladder of success

May you always get what you deserve

Yes, may you enjoy to the fullest.

Continue to live life to the fullest.

Party hard.

You are indeed a shining gem

Shivshankar Baburao Rokade Palamkar

Keep rocking

 

Excellent article written by Cabdi Khaaliq – Just one mistake

Excellent article written by Cabdi Khaaliq – Just one mistake

Education is about teaching, learning skills and GAINING knowledge. Education also means helping people to learn how to do things and encouraging them to think about what they learn. It is also important for educators to teach ways to find and use information.

Through education, the knowledge of society, country, and of the world is passed on from generation to generation. This may include education in morality, for example learning how to act as loyal, honest and effective citizens.

Education may help and guide individuals from one class to other. Educated individuals and groups can do things that the less educated cannot.

 

Mistake

Like you rightly used the word “Learning” to skills, similarly, say “gaining”/ “deriving” knowledge

Learning skills and “DERIVING” knowledge

It is important to specify. Hope, you get it.

 

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175+ secrets to improve English Grammar in 2018 – English Ma’am

Nicely written by Solo Jah’rhone. Following are the mistakes

Topic :

No one correct me when I’ve tried to make these exercises,Each times I’ve done those and wait in back for the corrections,no one came.So, Could you correct us as we do the exercise that you give usthanks in advance .(this is my topic

 

Mistake – 1

No one ‘correct’ me (Wrong)

No one “corrects” me (Correct)

Note- “No one” is singular

Mistake – 2

Each ‘times’ (wrong)

Each ‘time’ (correct)

Note- Always use “Singular”

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Mistake – 3

Wait in back “FOR” the correction.

Mistake – 4

 

Always create short sentences.

Try to use “comma” and “full stop” when required.

It will help you to write with fewer mistakes

Start first letter of the sentence with CAPITAL LETTER

Always write “I” in capital letter

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