Ibni Ibrahim Hassan has written beautifully on “Importance of Education”
Dear Ibni Ibrahim Hassan,
As an English Teacher, I must congratulate you for writing so well.
Here, is what you wrote
Education is crucial nowadays if we want to get better life in the future we should educate ourselves by continue learning why are we learning
Because we prevent to fall behind and the world is growing faster than before with new technology
At moment the knowledge is the key every area in our life.
There are few mistakes:-
Write short sentences . (Max One and half line)
I can’t see any full stop. (Please make note) Ok?
Don’t start the sentence with
After “Future” I have started a new sentence (check below)
Education is crucial nowadays if we want to get better life in the future. We should educate ourselves by continuously learning
If we prevent ourselves, we will fall behind. The world is growing faster than before, with new technology
Currently the knowledge is the key every area in our life.
Esmatullah wants to thank his mother Hawa
It is true that mother’s love is the purest of all. No one can have any doubt about the extent of sacrifices mothers give for their children. Yes, be it waking up all night to change the diapers or feeding their children.
Yes, still inspite of losing all the strength, she is fresh to again sacrifice another day for her children.
Her love in unconditional, so her pain of carrying for Nine months. She happily does all of that, because her love for children surpasses all.
Likewise, Esmatullah thanks her mother HAWA for all the sacrifices and pain, you have taken for her.
Yes, as mother, you should be proud of your son.
He apologizes to you for the naughtiness, he has done in the past.
He again thank you, for always caring and loving.
Your son, has grown up under your special care and supervision.
Esmatullah says “You Rock Mom:- Hawa
Letter of thanks to mother for giving surprise birthday party and inviting friends
Ezekiel is a university student in Philippines and passionate about dancing
She says and I quote
Hi, I’m Ezekiel “not my true name.”
I live in Philippines.
18th yrs of age.
Grade 11th senior high school at University of ICCT college.
My special skills is, I know how to Dance but not too much. I’d joined last day on the Dance Group ’cause I want to Improve my skills in dancing. And also I’ll make some poem/thoughts but not a Poet. (sorry I’m not good in English) that’s why I want to improve my skills in English.
Thanks to this Information.
I hope that you have a great day
Note of Thanks:-
Note of Thanks
I am Arpit Sharma, a 11 years experienced teacher in India and I thank Ezekiel
I am waiting to see your poems 🙂
Your English is satisfactory.
Continue to improve English. Also read the below post:-
175+ secrets to improve English Grammar in 2018 – English Ma’am
Nafizi Usman Abubakar has nicely written about “Importance of Education”
“Education Is Very Very Important Because Education Will Help You To Performs You Live In Simple Way Also Education Will Protect”
I am now editing and explaining the mistakes:-
Mistake – 1
Don’t add “Very” twice
Education is very important
Mistake – 2
Don’t use “Education” twice in a single sentence
Education is very important because “it”
Mistake – 3
Don’t change the TENSE in a single sentence
You used “IS” and “WILL” in the same sentence Why?
Education is very important because “it” helps you to perform
Here is the edited part of the whole paragraph
Education Is Very Important Because it helps You To Perform. You Live In Simple Way and Also Education Protects
My friend Pinay who is a writer from Phillipines invites everyone to visit her beautiful country.
She says and I quote
” I am pinay and my country is Philippines, it’s found around the Asia, small country but full of beautiful island i can’t say what name island is it because they’re so lot! if you visited my country you will never forget your moment here, + Filipino here are so Friendly so you will feel you’re so very welcome 😍❤”
Note of Thanks
I am Arpit Sharma, a 11 years experienced teacher in India and I thank my friend Pinay
I am your friend and I whole heartedly thank you for giving us such an interesting facts about your country .
I never knew about the beauty
I accept your invitation of visiting the country sometime in life.
Also Read :- Salman from Afghanistan shares about interesting facts
A visitor from Laos is quite upbeat about sharing interesting places which her country offers.
Yes, the excitement in her face can be seen, when she mentions the names of the prominent places which are quite a profound tourist destinations, such as KhonePheng Waterfall,WatPou temple,ThatLuang stupa and KhuangSee waterfall.
Tourists from across the world come and witness the natural beauty.
She is really proud and she is a citizen of Laos which has so much to offer.
Teacher Arpit Sharms
Further to my little experience I shared on job interview a couple of days ago, I feel that it is important to elaborate on “believing in ourselves, having a positive attitude and faith in ourselves for a brighter future for all of us”
To be able to get a job that pays well, that comes with rewarding perks and fringe benefits, one must be able to converse and write reasonably well in english coupled with the minimum basic paper qualification from the country of one’s origin.
One cannot simply ignore the importance of english. One ought to know that english is the stepping stone for knowledge. Senior executives serving in big international organisations throughout the english speaking world conduct their business activities in english. To join such corporations, one must fit himself in the organisation. If one cannot fit in, he becomes a MISFIT. He would be out of the company sooner than he was in. There is not much choice but to earnestly train
onesellf to be competent in english. There is an english saying “no pain no gain.”
To be able to conduct oneself well in english, one must think as well as speak in english at the same time. Refrain from thinking in one’s own mother-tongue and at the same time speak in english. The translation process within one’s mind would make matter worst.
For a change, start thinking and speaking english at the same time.
It is much easier to learn any language this way.
You will soon amaze your teachers, relatives and friends around you with your spoken and written english.
Believe in yourself. Have faith and confidence. Have a positive mindset. It is all in the mind. Teacher Arpit Sharma taught me one important belief. He says and I quote ” SUCCESS COMES TO THOSE WHO LOOK FOR IT.” There is truth in his wisdom.
Learn from teacher, Arpit Sharma. I BELIEVE he can guide us to achieve the highest level on english competency.
Friends and comrades, let us be united and learn from our GURU
Read:- Incase you have missed the first part, read the secrets to pass interview
Secrets to pass interview – Shared by honorable Mr. Steven Chin
Reasons for candidates to fail in Interview
People fail in interview because they are unable to impress the interviewer from the first onset of the meeting. Some do not dress suitably for the occasion or put on dirty looking or unpolished shoes. Your attire should be smart.
The hair on the head must be tidily kept. Few lack effective or persuasive communication skill. Most do not make any extra effort to find out the size, ownership, and the nature of business of the organisation. With knowledge of such information, we should be able to communicate better thus giving a better positive impression.
In short, many are not adequately prepared for the interview. When we fail to prepare, we are planning to fail.
To be successful in any interview, we must from the first onset give a good impression to the interviewer.
– Tell him that you firmly believe
that that you can do the job
well provided only given the
opportunity to do so;
– Tell him that you always have
positive attitude in all your
– Tell him that you have the
confidence to do the job well;
– Impress him that you will be
a valuable asset to the
When you leave, tell him that you like to work for the company and will be looking forward to receiving from him a favorably reply at the earliest.
Try to get a hand- shake by extending your right hand to him and thank him for the time spent
I hope you find my little experience useful. Please contact our teacher, Mr. Arpit Sharma for further explanation.
Read: Secrets to pass Interview – Part – 2
Also Read:- “Tell me about yourself”- What to reply to the recruiter
Steven Chin bids farewell to colleague Muthusamy on his promotion elsewhere .
This is what Mr. Steven Chin has to say for his dear colleague and friend Muthusamy who has been promoted to another department.
Good evening every one
We gather here this evening for one special purpose, that is to bid farewell to our colleague, Mr. Muthusamy who will be leaving us next week for a more senior position elsewhere.
At this moment, we are having a mixed feeling of joy and sadness. On one hand we feel happy for him because he has found a greener pasture elsewhere but on the other hand we feel sad for we will greatly miss him. We will definitely miss his pleasant face and cheerful disposition.
Mr. Muthusamy is more than just a dear colleague to most of us. To me he is my best friend.
We take this opportunity to wish well in all his future undertaking.
May god bless him with good health and happiness always.
Also Read:- How to write a farewell speech for a friend
Importance of true friends in today’s world of Yahaya Tijjani
As life in these days will not be completely individually, sepretly so we must comes togather in order to collaborate for our survival means integration, we must becareful in choices of friends worldwide for our success
Editing and explaining the mistakes now:-
Mistake – 1
Very poorly written
Don’t start the sentence with “As…….”
“Life these days…….”
Mistake – 2
Use “Present Tense” if possible, while forming sentences, as you are talking about things in general
Check the spellings , you have made lots of mistakes.